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Posted: Thu Aug 24, 2006 6:36 pm

This is my first scam that has gone anywhere so I thought I�d let you lot see how it�s going, and get a little feed back. It�s nowhere near finished and it�s not really going to make you laugh but hey, we all start somewhere.

I started out pinching a few ideas off of people, things I had read in other posts. Only modalities and not story lines. So if you want to shout at me for stealing your idea the PM button is at the bottom of the thread. It starts out a little desperate; with a few send your a picture with a gold fish. Although, now it�s moving along nicely.

The scam starts life as a letter asking for help. A young boy hasn�t got the money for an operation. The village is trying to raise the money but the are �10,000 short

My dear lost sheep, I will shepherd you back to the flock. I pray to god that he sent you to me. How fortunate that you ask for my help. God be praised. I run a charity here in Berkshire that gives money to the poor and needy and there is none more needy than a child. My church is more than capable to help. Please in the name of God and the angels, how can I help.

Father Patrick O�Hara
Build a village foundation

DearFather O'Hara
Thank you very much for coming to the aid of richard.may God bless you how do you want to donate,we have two options for u 1st.do u want come to Nigeria and made you donation,if u want to come send us your full name and address, so that we can process inviting letter for u.2rd if you don'twant to come use western union money transfer in sending your donation.with this detail.
Name=D3nnis Iw0ba
Address=234-01,Nigeria
Test question=who?

Answer=Richard

God bless WU
I start to try a little hard here. I wanted a trophy so I try the art scholarship

Dear brother with God

You must realise that there are certain conditions to our donating funds.
Most importantly a belief in God. Every year we give 15-20 sizable donations in our scholarship program aimed at making young African peoples lives better. This money has to be used for living and the community. The criteria for the donations is to give money to young talented artists who then use the money to make African art that we sell in galleries in the UK. The money we make goes to the artists community. So each candidate earns twice from the program.

I will be in Egypt ant the end of the month so I can bring the money with me then. you will need to arrange for someone to look after me during my stay in Nigeria. but I'm sure that wont be a problem.

I must ask again are you a good Christian person, and do you understand the conditions I give you.

Father O'hara.
Build a village Foundation.

Thanks father,we are Christians please, someone who will assists you during your visit here, don?t worry about. Father in you mail you said that you will be coming at end of this month. Please tell us the date and how many people whom will come with you send us your full name and address so that we will send the inviting letter, and also you mention about art. So we will like to tell you that youth?s art Exhibition is coming on in our state on September 10th, so we suggest you come at that time, we have one orphan in the foundation that will participate in Exhibition and also we will help you in getting some poor talented artist who will participate in the Exhibition as you said.
Regarding Richard?s health, is be coming critical, so the doctor told us
to make a part-payment of $25,000 out off $35,000,but currently we have getting $7,000 from international donors and $10,550 from Nigeria donors. So father we suggest you send some of your donation. We would have loved to wait till you come but Richard?s situation is becoming serious. We hope to deposit the money before wedsurday, so that the operation will be carried on.
Note; father we will like you to be a member of the foundation or a patron.We will send you a belief introduction of this foundation. Thanks and happy weekend and our regards to your congregation..

Wednesday comes and goes, but Richards a fighter

Dear brother

you have not put your name at the end of your e-mail. I do not know who I am talking to.

I pray that it will not be to late, but I have asked the foundation board to
release funds that we can send to Brother Richard to help in his medical bills. Pray to God that he gives the strength to hold on just a little longer. If the board can free up the funds we should be able to pay for the whole operation and nursing to help him recover.

My trip to Egypt starts on September 1st and lasts 8 days so I should be able to fly down to you on the 9th. The foundation will cover the costs of flights and accommodation so you have no worries there. your part is simple. I will need to know the name of an airport near you so I can add the flight to my travel plans. I will need to know the name of the place where I am staying, and I will need to know if you will provide someone to watch over me as I will be carrying a lot of money and important papers.

I believe that God has a small hand in our venture and we were meant to meet. I am happy that I will also be able to see the youth art exhibition as nothing would make my trip more memorable. I am including the charity requirements for the art scholarship with this e-mail so that you can show some of the artists. They may be eligible.

Your words about making me a patron of your foundation makes me happy, I am crying with pride and Christian love.

Please send pictures so we can pray for you all

Father O�Hara

Dear Father Unwin

Thanks for your swift response in this urgent matter. I have attached a
copy our executive members and Richard at the hospital so you people can have a picture of what you're praying for as requested which is a vital tool in this regards.

Sir, may we use this medium to bring to your knowledge that we are very patient here waiting for God to perform his signs on Richards sitaution which is getting worse as I speak to you.After our previous message, the Doctor still called us again and asked us to do we can to make the payment available today or tomorrow because they are not happy that this child is abandoned there as well, due to the payment and there is nothing they can do because the payment would be used to settle the bills of their foreign partners who will take part in the operation.

Sir, we are running out of patient.We are sorry to say this but time to act is now.Please have a short meeting withing your foundation and send in your donor because it will help us a great deal.We beg you in the Name of
Almighty God.

We are waiting for your urgent response in this matter.

Regards, Mr Malachy.

I start to stall and try for a trophyy

Mr. Malachy

I pray brother Richard holds on just a little longer. As we speak wheels are in motion trying to quickly free up the cash needed at such a short notice. Our accountants are a fickle breed making sure everything is done properly, but I asure you we are working round the clock. You will have your money, I promise.
Could the Hospital accept a promisary note from our accountants of legal department, I'm sure it's worth a try. I can get One started straight away.

Blessed is the man who see's the lord for he is truely close to God. (Botanical 21:14)

Please fear not I will keep you informed as you shall keep me informed.

Could you send a picture of yourself and where you live and one of Richard so I and my dioce's can see what we are praying for.

Father Unwin Filmebum

Dear Father Unwin

Sir, I ave already addressed all the points in your last mesage to
everybody and we all rejoice over your kindness towards this foundation.Early this morning, we got a call from a Doctor in the hospital where Richard is been admitted.The Doctor said that since yesterday night, Richard health is in bad state and needs urgent attention. But due to our inability to pay the part payment USD$ 25,000.00 completely needed to commence the operation knowing
fully well that we have already in our possession the sum of USD$15,550, Richard is still lying helplessly in the hospital be we beleive that Almighty God is watching.

Sir,we plead, upon the receipt of this message,kindly assist us with your donor, at least to pay the part payment completely to enable the Doctors commence treatment on Richard latest tomorrow evening as we do not want to lose him.As we wait for your arrival at Murtla Mohamed Airport Ikeja-Lagos after your trip from Egypt with the rest of the money needed for this operation as you have promised us to visit our foundation here because you are now our Patron and we pray that God will be your strenght in taking care of us.May God replenish you abundantly.
Finally, we arte urgently waiting for your donor today to help Richard
survive, sothe Doctor would start the operation possibly tomorrow y God's Special Grace.
Send your donor via western union money tranfer immediately with the
following information as follows:

NAME: DENNIS IWOBA
ADDRESS:LAGOS-NIGERIA
ZIPCODE: 23401
TEXT QUESTION: WHO?
ANSWER:RICHARD
AMOUNT----Amount above USD4,000 should be splited into two or three parts to enable free collection at the Bank here.Thats the instruction.

May God bless you as you treat this message with usual kindness to this foundation.Please kindly forward your contact telephone number while responding to this
message.

Regards,
Mr. Malachy.
234-803-9227551

I don�t want to give a number so

Dear Mr. Malachy

I unfortunately have meetings for a few days in other parts of the parish so I will be out of contact for a while but I asure you the foundation board is meeting to discuss freeing up the money.
Fth Patrick O�Hara

Here come the accountants

Dear Mr. Malachy

My name is Lord William Barking and I am private legal council to the
parties acting as build a village foundation. Now please don't be alarmed at my e-mail but it is the quickest way for your donation to be cleared and sent to you.

I was asked by Father Patrick O'Hara to help hasten the process as I believe there is an urgency involving a young boy and his medical bills.

I work for a firm providing legal council to the build a village foundation
and as such I have power to release the money on their approval. The money I am allowed to clear is of the value, and no more, than �22,000 to be used solely for medical bills and nursing care, and nothing else.

Now due to the stringent laws in the UK. both Civil and Tax, I require a
couple of forms to be filled out so the money can be sent to you. This is a must for the build a village foundation is a charity and is bound by certain laws, to release funds without taking certain precaution could mean imprisonment for the board of trustee's and the foundation loosing its charity status.

The first document is to enable me to work for you outside of the confines of UK. law. You must retain my services so I can process the money.

The second document is so I can claim money for my services. Unfortunately I do not work for free, but I can claim my fee from legal aid until a further date.

The third form is a joint venture form, legally binding you to my client
ensuring that the money transfer is legal.

The sooner you can print these documents fill in the numbered spaces, scan and re send them to me the sooner we can transfer the money. Again I apologise about the legal hill you have to climb, but this is customary with a UK. based charity.

I must also ask you to continue corresponding with Father O'Hara frequently as this will ensure the authorities leave the whole process alone.

Thank you for your time and swift response.

Lord William Barking

Dear Lord William Barking,

We have just received your message with attached multiple document to be filled and submitted.Please can you tell us which one we are to fill out
then because we are a little bit confused here.

We well understood that this document serves as an agreement between the two parties involved but the document you sent ha involved so many people like consultants, accountants and the rest of it.Are we to fill those
forms?.Until we hear from you now, we would be able to know our stand in this matter.

Regards,

Mr. Malachy Ohaeme.

Dear Mr. Malachy

I am sorry about the forms but as I stressed due to UK. charity donation laws they are a must. I will make it brief. In each form there are spaces with a number in brackets _____(1)_____(2)______

These are the spaces you must fill in your details. Unfortunately all of the forms must be filled out or we cannot proceed. I will be checking with Father Patrick regularly to see if you have sent the forms back. You must move forward quickly so I can release the funds.

The board have released �23,000(UK) for use in medical bills and nursing
costs.

Lord William Barking

Dear Father Patrick O'Ohara and
Lord William Barking,
we have read and undrrstand the content of the doc.that will take us some days.i hope that will not be later

Mr.obi Egbuniwe
(The foundation Director)

He�s not kidding 5 days to fill out your name a few times

Dear Mr. Malachy

I am just writing to you with a progress on the forms I asked you to fill in. I understand they can be complicated but I cannot proceed without them

Lord barking

Dear Lord Barking,

We have concluded the the filling of the document you forwrded.Kindly go and through as we have just sent it back to you now.

I hope the fund would be released today as well because there has been to much delay.

I am urgently waiting to hera from you.

Regards,

Mr Obi.

I have freed the money and will be sending you the information soon
Lord barking

Dear father

Good day,How is everything hope all is fine.
we hope you are still coming as you told us,currently the director of the foundation have meet the commissioner of acts and culture,in the state who is one of the organizers,So we told him about you and your coming and also we presented the charity document you sent to us for, him to help us give the youth who will participate in the art Exhibition,So in his reply,he made you one of the Guest speaks in which you will have opportunity to showcase (charity art scholarship ) Father how many people are coming with you,as you asked before,you are coming owerri, Imo state, Nigeria.please send us your picture

Mr. malachy

Dear Brother Malachy

Please keep me informed of Brother Richard as we are all desperately praying for him. I would like many picture of Richard yourself the area you live in and all the people you know so we can put them up on our foundation wall. We have many pictures of the people we help and visitors come and see hem and donate to us so we have more money to give.

I have spoken to Lord Barking and he says he will finalise the money today and send you the details so we are very close. I will let you know later all the information. All the people in our congigation have been giving money to help and we had a charity fund raiser day with cake stalls and bouncy castles and clowns. We have quite a sum. We could build richard his own hospital. But seriously we have �24,500 for Richard and his care.

I am very honoured that you would like me to be a speaker at your art day. The scholarshp program is very close to my heart and does so much good. The joy it can bring to some poorer people is un measurable. If you would like to get some of the artists to contact me so we can get some details in advance that would be good.

I will be bringing my Egypt trip forward as I have to take some money to a schools project that is ahead of schedual and the builders need paying. It is a small annoyance but how can you get angry for promt work. My trip to Egypt starts on the 27th of august and last 3 days so I can fly down to Nigeria on the 30th. This means I will have to spen a little longer with you. Will that be a problem. I hope it's not. I will be traveling alone as I am the only one who can fly on the 27th so I will need someone to look after me. I will also need access to a reputable bank as I will be carrying a quite a lot of money which will need to be deposited. Most of the money will be for the art scholarships.

Please let me know if I need to arange someone to look after me or you can help.

I have sent some pictures of myself and my staff and the church we work at.

Fth Unwin Filmebum

Dear Father,

This s to acknowledge the receipt of your last message and the content therein was well noted.

Meanwhile, after reading your message, we had a meeting with the board of directors and concluded that this your measure has taken much of our time and that is not bringing any development to Richard's situation.

Sir, with all due respect, we have sent our pictures and also filled the required document which your consultant sent us and now you're talking of sending you more pictures.why didn't you say this in the beginning? Any way, thats not a problem.Bear in mind that all this exercise is taking us money to carry it out and you well know that we need money more than anything else.

Further oversight, we found out that your trip schedule has changed from 9th to 30th August as you told us previously.Why can't you straightforward? Remember that you're dealing with an organisation not a person.

In conclusion, please kindly declare your interest in assisting us with your donor upon the receipt of this message because according to the Doctor, Richard's health is detorating and anything that happens after three days from now, he should not be blamed.

We are urgently waiting to hear from you.

Regards,

Mr Obi Egbuniwe.

Dear Mr. Obi

I have been a man of god for 27 years, I have done charity work for all that time. And in all my years I have never seen somebody so concerned for money even for such a noble cause. I have offered over �20,000 to a small child and in such a small amount of time I might add. A little gratitude is not much to ask. You contacted me and straight away I raised money, so my side of this arrangement is not at fault.

My travel plans are not centred around you. My travel plans changed as a result of projects I have given money to being finnished ahead of schedule. I thought you may appreciate my visiting Richard as I wanted to give him gifts and well wishes from all the people of my parish. If you do not wish me to come I wont. And where will you be.

I am hurt by your last email as I feel it brings into question my charecter and my position in the church of the lord. If you would like this relationship to continue then I will be expecting your appology in your next letter

Father O'Hara

Dear Father,

Forgive us for our curiosity.It wasn't intentional.

Meanwhile, we are so sorry for our last message to as it was due to pressures from the Docotor about Richard's situation. Once again, we apologise for our mistake.

However, the reason why we are helbent on sending the money Is to enable the doctors start the operation before your arrival to vist us here.Is not a must that you will send the total amount you have for us now, all we need now is to arrange and pay at least the part payment completely thereafter,the rest would be paid probably upon your arrival.

Please forgive once again, we really need to pay this part payment of USD$25,000 today or tomorrow.We have previously updated you on the amount we have at hand. Once again, is still USD15,550 and the part payment is USD$25,000 out of the total bill of USD$35,000.With due respect Father, we are pleading to you to soft-pedal your heart with Richard's condition to take punitive measures of his detoriating health condition.Kindly send your donor upon the recipt of this message to enable us pay the part payment proper.The balance
2amount to complete the part payment is USD$9,450

Once again,the payment information is as follows to send your donor VIA WESTERN UNION MONEY TRANSFER:

NAME: DENNIS IWOBA
ADDRESS: LAGOS-NIGERIA
ZIPCODE:23401
TEXT QUESTION: WHO
ANSWER: RICHARD.

Please be informed that while making the payment, you are advised to split the money into 2 or 3 parts not more than $4,000 each.Also let the money be in dollars not Euro.

Thank you Father for being there for us. We love and you are most welcome in our foundation.

Regards,

Mr Obi.
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Dear Lord Barking,

We want to start by giving God all the gratitude for releasing this fund to us.

After going through your message,we immediately filled the necessary gaps for the MTCN to appear but it was rather too fast to copy it.We need your help urgently.

According to your message, we understood that the money was sent but without any clearification from whether WESTERN UNION or not.We noted that due to large amount involved, and the risk in transferring into our country, you have used a premium service.What does it require to collect this money today?

We need your help to give us the western union MTCN and other information to get this fund.Please we beg you to make it easier for us.

We await your urgent response.

Regards,

Mr Obi.

Dear Malachy

I thank you for your appology. Humility is a trait given by god. I also thank you for your hard work in finding someone to look after me.
I have landed in egypt and and will be spending the next few days overlooking school building projects so I will be quite busy, but I will send you more information about my travel plans when I have had some sleep and something to eat.

I will speak to you soon.

Fth Patrick O'Hara

Dear Obi

Western Union offer a premium service for large amounts of money entering Nigeria. This service involves added security questions for intended to combat crime and terrorism and also to stop money going to the wrong person by avoiding the need to send information by e-mail.

I have spoken to the people at Western Union who say "The website is so simple even a child could understand it".

The money cannot be transferred to another service as certain procedures have been put in place. There is �24,000 waiting for you to retrieve, so I suggest you have another go.

Please use the same information I sent in my last e-mail to obtain your money.

Lord Barking.

Dear Lord Barking,

Thanks for your swift response and clearification.

Meanwhile,we humbly wish to elaborate some facts regarding this fund you gave to us.

Please you're the one who sent this money to us and we are in the position to state the process by which to receive this money.The method by which you
sent the money is rather not helpful to us.Sorry to say this but we have to tell you.We agreed that it is because of the Large amount and its security notwitstanding, their service is not functional here.We have experienced it before and it doesn't work.

Please Sir, what we need now as we have already told Father is the money to at least complete the part payment to the hospital where Richard is been admitted.And the amount is USD$9,550. Thereafter, Father upon his arrival to visit the foundation would come with the rest of the money.Once again,
the most important thing is not all the money but to commence the treatment on Richard and what we need now is USD$9,550.

Sir, we humbly seek your good office, kindly withdraw this 24000 and kindly cash USD$9,550 and send it Via western union money transfer with information already given to you as follow as it is the way we have been receiving donors.

NAME: DENNIS IWOBA
ADDRESS: LAGOS NIGERIA
ZIPCODE:23401
TEXT QUESTION: WHO?
ANSWER: RICHARD.
AMOUNT: USD$9,550.

NOTE: Split the money into two parts and send it via western union office near you because is the easiest way to receive money here.Thanks a lot.Please forward your contact telephone number to enable talk.You can call me upon the receipt of this message 234-803-9227551

Regards,

Mr Obi

Dear Obi.

I have spoken to Western Union about your problems obtaining your money. The lady I spoke to said there was no problem with the process except that it is a new way to transfer money and may take a while for people to get used to it. I have requested the money back so I can send it in another way but this takes time. It has been suggested that you keep trying in the mean time as the website will still accept your security code and the MTCN number is still valid.

Please keep me informed of your progress, and I shall do the same.

Let me know if you are successful.

Lord william Barking

Dear Lord barking,

We are not saying that there is problem in any way but this method does not
work here.We are sure of what we are saying.Even if you ask the western union agent, they would say yes is working, we are the one to get through this processes.We have experienced this before and it does not work out.

The best way for us now is you stop the huge payment and get out the urgently needed amount USD$9,550 to complete the part payment to the hospital and split the cash into two parts and send it through western union office near you with the information already given to you and not online payment because this is the most easier way receive money here.

With due respect, kindly be of help as you well know that there is no time because the doctors are worried over aou delay because we have given them so much dates to pay them.

Once again, here is the recipient name to send the amount USD$9,550 needed now and let the rest of the money come with Father in his visit to our foundation.

NAME: DENNIS IWOBA
ADDRESS:LAGOS-NIGERIA
ZIPCODE:23401
TEXT QUESTION: WHO
ANSWER:RICHARD
AMOUNT:USD$9,550

And then send the ten digits western union MTCN to us.

*May God bless as you do this urgently.

Regards,

Mr Obi

Dear Sir,

We just arrived from the Bank as you have instructed to and the Bank turned the information down by saying that since the reformation of Banking regulation,amount above USD$10,000 would not be paid and this online method is not operational.

Please stop making this difficult for us.Please sent the amount USD$9,550 we can get now with the information given to you by cash not online payment.

This will be easier for us.

Thanks alot.

Regards,

Mr Obi

Dear Obi

I have spent the last 2 days trying to retrieve the money I sent via Western Union and eventually they have released the money to me. Unfortunately I do not feel Western Union are fit to transfer this amount of money so I have given Father Patrick a certified bankers draft for the full amount you have requested. A certified bankers draft can be cashed at any bank I n the world and there should be no problem getting the money. I will resend you �4,000 via international Money Gram which you can pick up from any bank. There is less hassle, and will be no problem obtaining your money. All I need is a bank and an address for you to pick up the money from. I will ten send you a 10 digit number and you will have your money.

Please respond quickly.

Lord William Barking

Dearest Father,

How are you today? we expected to hear from you after our message of yesterday confirming that Lord Barking has released the fund to us and we are having some difficulties redeeming the money.

We have already suggested to him to withdraw the huge online payment and cash USD$9,550 and send it to us while you come with the rest of the money after your trip to Egypt.As this amount now is what we needed most to complete the part payment to enable the doctors commence the operation on Richard.

Father, may the good Lord continue to shower his blessing on you for this assistance you have rendered to this foundation.We can't wait to receive you next Month in our foundation here.

Please kindly see that this amount needed is sent to us as we have already sent the recipient information to Lord Barking to carry the transfer at western union near him.

We look forward hearing from you upon thereceipt of this message.

We Love you.

Mr Obi
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Dear father
Good day,how is everthing and happy sunday.
regarding to the security of a thing you mention,i have contacted the central police station owerri divison tp provide personal security service.in their reply they gave me 3 option to choose ,but am not in the right postion to make the decision,i gave the Dsp incharge your e-mail address to forward the options for you to choose,so expect mail from them, Father strengthen this relationship by given us your contact number.the foundation have provide 406 peugout car with a drive for your visit Mr malachy
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Dear Lord Barking,

We are in receipt of your message and the content therein was well noted.

Please kindly make the payment of the �4000 equivalent to USD Via money gramn or western union money transfer upon the receipt of this message with the following information already given to you as follows:

NAME: DENNIS IWOBA
ADDRESS: LAGOS-NIGERIA
ZIPCODE:23401
TEXT QUESTION: WHO
ANSWER:RICHARD.
AMOUNT: �4000

Please PAY the equivalent in dollars and split it into two parts before sending it because the new banking regulation does not allow big amount more than $5000 to be withdrawn from either money gram Or western union here in Nigeria.We can then cash the money from Bank thats operate Western union OR money gram here like (UBA)UNITED BANK FOR AFRICA operates MONEY GRAM while OCEANIC BANK operates WESTEN UNION.

After the payment, kindly send us the 10digits western union OR money gram MTCN for pick up. Once again,Remember spliting the money into two parts and make sure you do not make mistakes while writing the recipient information as DENNIS IWOBA.

Awaiting for your urgent response.

Mr Obi.

Dear Obi

Sorry about the delay, it is a public holiday here in the UK. I have sent the money as requested in 2 parts, of $3,700. The first part has been transfered and can be picked up at western union. Once you have picked up the money I waill send the second part.

The remainder of the foundation money is with father Patrick as the form of a international bankers draft.

The MTCN number is WU: 7958673569

Sorry for the delay

Lord Barking

Dear Lord Barking,

We have just received your message forwarded the western union MTCN and was well noted.

However, for we to go to bank and pick the money, woth due respect Sir, kindly scan and send to us the recipt issued to you at the western union office to enable us present it to bank for immediate payment.And also we want to know the name of the SENDER and RECEIVER/RECIPIENT as it appeared on the western union receipt so we can fill the pick up correctly.This is to make sure everything goes smoothly at the Bank. We are sorry if we have troubled you so much.

Please treat this urgently and once we pick the first part of the money, we then notify you.

Waiting to receive the western union receipt.

Regards,

Mr Obi.

Dear obi

I have sent and sent the MTCN number in many different ways. What is wrong with just picking the damn money up

Lord Barking

Dear Lord Barking

How are you today? with regards to our last message, we would appreciate you to scan and send the western union receipt issued you at the western union center where you made the payment to enable us present it to the bank before they pay us as requested.

Please treat the message urgently. we are waiting for the attached copy of the western union receipt Or Alternatively, you can copy out the payment information as it appeared in the receipt and send it to us if you cannot hasten up with the sacnning the receipt.

What the Bank needs to confirm before they pay us is as follows:as it appeared in the receipt.

SENDERS NAME:...........
ADDRESS:................
MTCN:...................

Therefore, be of help Sir so we can finalize everything today.Kindly scan, attach and send the western union receipt to avoid going all round again.

May the Peace of the Lord be with you in Jesus Name.Amen.

Regards,

Mr Obi

Dear Obi.

Sorry for the delay, I have scanned the reciept like you asked

Sender: Lord Barking
Recipient: Mr Obi

MTCN 7958673569

Amount: $3,700

Please let me know when you pick it up

Dear Lord barking,

This inform you that we just received your message re-confirming the payment information and the content was all confused to us.

Meanwhile, this is becoming too difficult for us here to sort out.The western union attachement you forwarded could not open and the MTCN you gave us did not match the information.

However, we gave you the recipient name as DENNIS IWOBA not my name MR OBI as Dennis is the one to go and pick the money at the bank.We repeatedly gave you this payment information to avoid making mistakes and still, you went to make the paymenmt with my name instead of DENNIS IWOBA as recipient. I am not in the position to go and cash the money but rather DENNIS IWOBA as already given to you.Therefore, the payment should be made in his name on behalf of the foundation to pick the money at the bank.

Nevertheless, Please we plead to you.This has caused a lot of delays on our side and having stressed you about because of this payment.There is one adage that says "Anything doing is What doing well" Please amend this mistake immediately you get this message.Kindly go to western union office and resend the money to DENNIS IWOBA as recipient not Mr Obi.Send the two parts to DENNIS IWOBA as recipient at once but let it be splited as advised.

After the payment, carefully scan and send the western union receipt to us or alternatively write out the your full name as the sender and dennis iwoba as recipient as it appeared on the western union receipt and send it to us for immediate pick up.

Finally, we beg you in Name of Almighty God who we both serve, he is the only one that can tell the position of Richard in the Hospital and what our unstable promises to pay the bills to the the hospital has caused as well also because the delay this money has been taken to reach us.

In conclusion, please resend this money to help this critical situation and please we beg of you to be responding to our message on time i.e morning time,because we have been waiting to hear from you since morning and your message just came in this evening.To fasten up the whole thing, you can also call us once you are through with the payment at the western union to notify us on (234-803-9227551)

Please be steady in responding because this is giving us sleepless night.

May God e with you.

Regards,

Mr Obi
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Dear Lord Barking,

Did you get our response to your message of yesterday?

As per the message, please read the message very well and correct the mistake there.

Kindly resend thr money with the recipient name as DENNIS IWOBA already given to you from the beginning and not MR OBI.

Below is the recipient information which you resend the money to this morning immediately you get this message

RECIPIENT NAME: DENNIS IWOBA
ADDRESS:LAGOS-NIGERIA
ZIPCODE:23401
TEXT QUESTION: WHO
ANSWER: RICHARD

This is how you are going to send this money to us because DENNIS IWOBA is incharge of receiving money sent to our foundation.Therefore every payment must be made in his name as the recipient on behalf of the foundation as he will present his identity before the pick up at the bank.So Sir, we beg of you, kindly resend this money immediately with information listed already and scan the receipt and send it to us.

Please do not make any other mistakes.Please send your direct contact number so we can reach you today. we have requested for your number severally but you paid us deaf ears. Please we need it for easy communication.

Waiting,

Mr Obi

Dear Obi

I shall try this once more. A lot of my time and effort has gone into this transaction and I feel that somewhere we are missing each other.

I have been back to the western Union and changed the name to Dennis Iwoba.

RECIPIENT NAME: DENNIS IWOBA
ADDRESS:LAGOS-NIGERIA
ZIPCODE:23401
TEXT QUESTION: WHO
ANSWER: RICHARD
MTCN: 7958673569
Amount: $3700

Western Union has sent me an e-copy of the reciept which I am forwarding to you.

Please let this be the last time we have to do this as is is becoming a costly excersise.

Lord Barking,

Dear father

Good day,how is everthing and happy sunday.
regarding to the security of a thing you mention,i have contacted the central police station owerri divison tp provide personal security service.in their reply they gave me 3 option to choose ,but am not in the right postion to make the decision,i gave the Dsp incharge your e-mail address to forward the options for you to choose,so expect mail from them, Father strengthen this relationship by given us your contact number.the foundation have provide 406 peugout car with a drive for your visit
Mr malachy
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father

sorry in forgot to tell you that we have gotten a bank you ask for

mr malachy

Dear Malachy

I thank you for your apology. Humility is a trait given by god. I also thank you for your hard work in finding someone to look after me.
I have landed in Egypt and will be spending the next few days overlooking school building projects so I will be quite busy, but I will send you more information about my travel plans when I have had some sleep and something to eat.

I will speak to you soon.

Fth Patrick O'Hara
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Dear Mr. Malachy

Egypt is fantastic. I have spent 2 days making people happy and that is the greatest gift. I have included a picture of the first children who will attend the school, I have lots more but I am pressed for time at the moment. The school project is almost finished here, and the first children and teachers will start classes early September. The Head master is called Mr. Adjo and seems like a nice man.

Would you like some souvenirs of Egypt as everything is so nice, in fact I will bring everyone gifts. I hope you like hats. I have lots of those red fuzzy hats with the tassels on. You know the kind Tommy Cooper wore. Just Like That. hahaha

I will write a proper letter later as I'm going to a trip to see some mummies.

Love always Patrick O'Hara

Dear Father,

We pray to God to be your strenght throughout your journey in Jesus name. You will succeed.Whatever you lay your hands on will prosper.Evil shall not befall you.You are a victorious child.You are more than a conqueror.

However,we are waiting to receive the payment of 4000 pound from Lord Barking today according to his last message.Thereafter, you will come with the rest of the money.All we need now is to complete the part payment.

Thanks for your benevolence. We thank God for your Life and may you continue to shine in every land you step your fit on.

Peace be with you. We await for your arrival.

Regards,

Mr Malachi

Dear Malachy

I will be flying down to Murtle Mohamed airport tomorrow arriving at 9pm local time. If you cannot meet me I can arrange a hotel, but I do not want to be alone for more than 1 night. I am carrying the bankers draughts which have been validated and can be cashed in Nigeria.

The Egypt trip was fantastic. Lots of children were there to greet me and I know the project will be a success. I have lots of gifts for everyone so I have a lot of bags and boy are they heavy.

I am really looking forward to visiting your country and I hope the 2 foundations can work together and do a lot of good. There is so much hope that a little money can give.

I will be at my lap top from now until I fly out tomorrow so I hope to hear from you soon.

How is young Richard? Did the money Lord Barking send help at all? I know it wasn't the full amount needed but it should have helped. I hope he is Ok.

Love by the grace of god

Father Patrick O'Hara

Baiting Guru Joined: 03 Mar 2006 Posts: 7101 Location: Yes

First of all -- no one owns the baiting modalities. They're there not only for amusement purposes but also for education. God knows we all take bits and parts that we like from other baiters and use them. Our goal is the same: to waste the time and energy of scammers so they don't have as much to focus on the real victims.

Secondly -- you let your mugu take too much control. He was always pushing you for the money and while you did get him to do a form, he never lost sight of what he wanted, which made you have to come up with excuses that he was quick to complain about.

You needed to pull back a bit. Either go silent or rear back for a nice slap and ask just exactly who he is to yell at a Man of God!? You do charity work around the world and never has he seen someone so concerned with money -- even if for a noble cause.

That said -- for an early bait, you made it last a while -- it was certainly a learning experience. You may have been trying for too much too fast however -- trophies, safaris, etc. Sometimes it's good to just bait straight for a while -- that's the best way to learn and you don't have to be concerned with achieving any special goal.

Good job. Smile

Posted: Thu Aug 24, 2006 6:58 pm

It's not finnished yet. I only got the last email this morning. I will slap and see how it goes.

Cheers for the input.
I will add to the original post as it progresses
updates x

Posted: Sun Aug 27, 2006 6:59 pm

I know there are no real slaps but I'm starting to get 6 e-mails a day now. Most of them are repeats of the same e-mail, but I think my lad can start to taste money.

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