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Posted: Tue Apr 17, 2007 11:35 pm

Allright here we go. My first real bait, started baiting a couple of years ago and stopped after one aborted attempt when work commitments took over.
I have uploaded a Word .doc which you can download and read. I didn't want to fart about publishing the whole bait on one page and I also wrote the Word document as I was doing the bait.
Judging by what I have seen on the forum this is a (Relatively) competent first attempt. Some of the slaps I gave were (In my opinion, anyway) bloody hilarious and still make me spray tea on my keyboard when I think of them.

I would very much appreciate it if my fellow baiters could download and peruse the document and give me some honest and constructive opinions, this will help me in future baits.
The document is here:
http://rapidshare.com/files/26559310/Beaverhousen.doc.html
Apologies for using Rapidshare, I know it's a bit of a pain but the results are worthwhile.
Big Thanks and kudos to Krona for mentoring me through this first bait, wouldn't have lasted half as long without your advice!

Posted: Wed Apr 18, 2007 1:08 am

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My parents were wiped out in the Liverpudlian flatulence epedemic of 1968...

Since you asked for a pointer I have one point. It seems you are working harder than the mugu. Turn the tables on him. Make him work harder than you. There's some really good stuff in your bait. Make sure you recycle it.

All in all, not bad. Kept the little trout on for 30 pages of some serious lad abuse. Laughing

Posted: Wed Apr 18, 2007 6:23 am

I know it looks like I may be working harder than him, but I was enjoying it too much and my imagination takes over at times. I just can't help myself!

Posted: Wed Apr 18, 2007 8:31 am

I don't think it's work if you're having fun. Work is something you HAVE to do. That bait sounded like FUN. Keep up the good FUN Laughing

Posted: Wed Apr 18, 2007 8:49 am

I think the screaming heebiejeebies must be well-known on the Ivory Coast - your lad seems to have sussed that, or else he gave up after having to jump through hoops for you. Laughing

The late addition of the religious stuff by you had him turning to God remarkably quickly, which was funny to read. Nice work. Very Happy

Posted: Wed Apr 18, 2007 11:45 am

I really liked the religious angle too. It's quite easy to push the religion button with a lot of scammers, but it's really hard to get them to stop once started!

Posted: Sat May 05, 2007 4:18 am

Great job Sidney

clapping

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