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PostPosted: Wed Jan 18, 2012 9:38 pm Reply with quoteBack to top

You mean to Crotchy. I don;'t know about Brainy over there, but I got the stuff that the groupies want. Oh yea, free Pokemon cards.

You know you want some. Twisted Evil

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PostPosted: Thu Jan 19, 2012 11:05 am Reply with quoteBack to top

Okay, just got the base tracks from Brainy. Man this guy can take something I write and flesh it out like no one's business. Why are we not rich yet? Oh yea, releasing music for free....

Brainiac, we need to rethink our business strategy.

Anyway, the tracks are _AMAZING_, and I'll be laying down the solos (yes, plural) and vocals when I get back from school today. Which will be in like 3.5 hours. Then comes the mixing, because I know I suck at vocals, but I wanted to give it a shot. And the solos. I record them at least 35362376 times before I'm satisfied. So the song will be released sometime before year 2050. Very Happy

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PostPosted: Fri Jan 20, 2012 8:32 pm Reply with quoteBack to top

Well, I laid down some guitar tracks, thickened the rythm a bit with a dual rythm guitar, and laid down a megadeth style solo. I'm sucking on the vocals though.

I'll keep trying. I even installed an entire software suite over my old Linux install for it, and while I got a voice FX chain sounding nice, the lag on my machine was too horrible Sad

On top of that, the track that has Brainy talking the words along with it actually sounds pretty good. That mellow talking makes a great contrast. Too bad I sound like mickey mouse in comparison. Razz

Anywho, if anyone wants a demo track, let me know.

Edit: I've decided that I can't do the vocals. I just don't have the voice for it, and trying to rough it up a tad only led to a sore throat. I stopped when i hacked up some blood. Sorry brainy, you're gonna have to do the vocals. My buddy down the road said he would do them, but he's been about as reliable as a Ford Taurus with no transmission.

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PostPosted: Sun Jan 22, 2012 9:37 am Reply with quoteBack to top

I know I'm probably supposed to just keep appending to my previous messages, instead of 3 posts in row, but since a couple days are passing between posts...

Anywho, we're running out of lyrics, folks. We're doing BookReader's rap stuff, then we're out of baiter lyrics for the Eater album.

Big Al: I haven't forgotten the lyrics you sent me, that's just a separate project

Cougar: I'm waiting for your new stuff Very Happy

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PostPosted: Sun Jan 22, 2012 10:45 am Reply with quoteBack to top

Okay, okay, you guilted me into finishing one of them... no smarties involved. Wink

Scansion changes slightly in the 3rd verse, but I think it still works, yes/no?

-----
Lion's Den

You walked into the lion's den
Wanting to steal my money
With promises of untold wealth
A dream of milk and honey
You thought I could be tricked
You thought I could be scammed
Smallboi, when I'm done with you
you'll think that you've been damned

No mercy in the lion's den
You'll feel this baiter's claws
As a scammer you're condemned
to justice, evermore

There'll be no payout from these paws
No funds or gold or money
Just endless lies like those you've told
and yes, I'll think it funny
to close your bank accounts
to send you on safari
You see, it's now my goal
to destroy you entirely

No mercy in the lion's den
You'll feel this baiter's claws
As a scammer you're condemned
to justice, evermore

I'll savour your confusion
Feast on your despair
and when I've had my fill of you
I'll hang you in my lair
See, baiters don't work alone
We group up to attack
And when I'm done tormenting you
I'll throw you to the pack.

No mercy in the lion's den
You'll feel our hunters' claws.
As a scammer you're condemned
to bleed forever more.

-----

Applause or rotten fruit as appropriate...

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PostPosted: Sun Jan 22, 2012 11:24 am Reply with quoteBack to top

Third verse could be a break down. Razz

Out of curiosity, do you read Edgar Allen Poe alot?

And would you mind if we changed "lion" to "cougar"? You know, fits the author.

Other than that, yes, quite nice. You win 10 smarties. The chorus's last line doesn't rhyme too well, but trust me, we can fix that. Musically, I'm thinking Pantera? Maybe some Naglfar...

Tell ya what, kitty, we'll let you decide what genre of music you want this song to be. I figure you must have had some style in your head while writing these out!

Sorry about guilting you into it, but I do believe you said you had a couple others in the works as well?

Also, if this post feels... odd... it's 6:23 AM, and I have spent the last 12 hours doing schoolwork and studying for tomorrow's history test. Razz

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PostPosted: Sun Jan 22, 2012 2:52 pm Reply with quoteBack to top

^If I said 'Katy Perry stylee' you'd cack your pants... Laughing

Seriously, I'll leave the musical stylings to you guys - you know what you're talking about. (Pantera? Naglfar? *heads to Google*)

Have read some Poe in the past, but not The Raven, although I did think of that after I'd typed the first 'evermore'.

Happy for it to be changed, whatever you need for it to fit. Yes, others are in the pipeline, works in progress - trying to get 'it could be you' finished but typically 'battlezone' keeps hogging the muse... Mad

Prrrr, I await delivery of my smarties! Good luck for the history test.

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PostPosted: Mon Jan 23, 2012 12:02 am Reply with quoteBack to top

Katy Perry...hmm... Oh, yea, she's that one that impersonates Kermit the Frog while singing about rapidly changing body temperatures, right? Twisted Evil

Are you talking about like this? http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=NY1ku9qAwpI

If so, we'll just use that music. I wrote it a long time ago, never got around to finishing the lyrics.

I hope you Googled Pantera and Naglfar, they play a huge influence on my music... my metal music at least.

Battlezone? The old Atari arcade game? Understandable for it to be hogging attention, that game was awesome!

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PostPosted: Tue Jan 24, 2012 4:17 am Reply with quoteBack to top

Hi Cougar,

Those "Lion's Den" lyrics, pretty sure Crotchy and I can work with those.

We were just talking about how we should take care of Bookreader's rap lyrics,
and take care of all the submissions backlog here at Eater.

I sent him "Love Lies Bleeding" in .mp3 format as an e-mail attach. He added
chugging guitar riffage and a solo in the middle. To which I re-did the vocal part.

The resulting "work-in-progress", still a rough draft, I posted at mediafire
so here's the link: http://www.mediafire.com/?nyj0yicsjr3p8x9

Now I realize that we can send individual parts using the file-sharing site.
I'm still learning how to be a long distance musician. We're on opposite
coasts of the USA, (Crotchy and I). But it's a small world on the Interwebs.

We should be able to have cleaner mixes in the future.

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PostPosted: Thu Jan 26, 2012 8:19 am Reply with quoteBack to top

Here is a real good version of "Love Lies Bleeding".

Cougar's lyrics, Keptil's guitars, rhythm and the screaming solo, and me
on bass and drums. (and clear, easy-to-hear vox).

http://www.mediafire.com/?cfj8e1vdd7ekj1d

And just for laughs, I made up an un-plugged ver. of "Out of Ladland".

http://www.mediafire.com/?ojmhqka9371rbpg


Now it's next on to Booky's rap, Crotchy says he's working on it.
Then Cougar's "Lions Den". We're having fun now. Through the magic of
technology we can have a band in spite of the hindrance of geography.

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