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mhr
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PostPosted: Thu May 01, 2008 9:08 pm Reply with quoteBack to top

I RECEIVE THE STANDARD "NEED HELP GETtING MY BEAD BROTHERS MONEY OUT OF THE COUNTRY" - BORING - $28 MILLION AND HE IS ONLY OFFERING ME 25%? I'LL START THE THREAD WITHOUT THE BORING OPENING LETTER.

From: Robyn Bird <[email protected]>
Subject: Re: Person/Reply
To: [email protected]
Date: Tuesday, April 29, 2008, 3:10 PM


Good Morning,
I have read with much interest your proposal relative to your late brothers money issues. I am sorry to hear that your brother passed away - I hope he was not ill too long. After my brother died I too was the last daughter left and have been alone ever since.

Please let me know how I might help you out in any way I can.

Warm Regards,
Robin Bird

Ms. Robin Bird
RBird Enterprises, LLC
68+1 Swallosit Lane
Ny,NY

from CHIDI ABIOLA <[email protected]>
reply-to [email protected],

to Robyn Bird

date Thu, May 1, 2008 at 1:47 AM
subject MS.BIRD,call me.
mailed-by yahoo.com
signed-by yahoo.com

hide details 1:47 AM (12 hours ago) Reply


Dear Ms. Robin Bird,

I acknowledge the reciept of your email message with thanks. I am looking for an honest person who can assist in getting this money out of Africa and to a safe place for further investment in businesses with good returns .

I want to use your names and get my fund across to your country first before the investment programm that I am planing to do which you will guide me.

Now, what is needed from you are the following, your full names , phone and and any form of identification of yourself,to enable me get an attorney to forward same to the company where this money is presently deposited as family treasures to change ownership to your person.This is for expediency as I figure that you might not be disposed to travel to this place to conclude the documentations and transfer of the funds within a short period of time.The attorney will now act with a power of attorney to effect the necessary process of release and transfer of the funds to your nominated account.

I will be pleased to know a little more about your person:age,occupation,marital status,experience in business or profession.I will be waiting for your phone call for further details and my contact phone number is:+229 97 84 94 20,call me.I am sure that you know transactions of this nature and magnitude are kept secret and confidential until concluded to avoid people being overtly and covertly being interested in the transaction.I therefore will ask you to keep all aspects of this transaction to your self until such a time.



Best regards,

Chidi Abiola.

from Robyn Bird <[email protected]>
to [email protected],

date Thu, May 1, 2008 at 1:31 PM
subject Re: MS.BIRD,call me.
mailed-by gmail.com

hide details 1:31 PM (26 minutes ago) Reply


Hello Dear Mr. Chidi,

Thank you so much for writing back to me.

It is nice to hear from a man as I am usually alone here at my corporate headquearters surrounded by men who are only interested in me because I own the company.

I shall try to answer you questions that you have asked.

First I can assure you that I am an honest person. Our conversations will be in strictest confidance. My, this is exciting isn't it?

Second, I am 30 years old. I own the company that my Father built up and left to my brother and I before he passed away. Now that my brother is gone I am the only family member left to run the company. Keeping track of all the sales and huge sums of money we take in every week is very hard for a single woman of my age. I don't have a lot of experience in business, but I think I am smart enough to eventually figure out where the moeny should go and how to spend it wisely.

Please let me know how I can help you. This all sounds so exciting - you see I have never had a relationship with a man from a different country before and I am very excited about getting to know you better during the course of our business.

I also tried to call your number +229 79 (MY DYSLEXIA KICKED IN S/B 97) 84 94 20 but it just rang and rang - perhaps you were not at home but out at the beach having fun or enjoying yourself on your day off. I love the beach!

What form of identification would be OK for you? I have attached a picture of me if that helps? If I should have the need to come to your country to complete or help you in this business, perhaps this would help you identify me. I am afraid that the flash was set too high on my camera so my feet arent' showing - but I guess you won't need to see them to identify me should we meet Wink) (THE PICTURE I ATTACHED IS OF PEGGY LIPTON - FOR THOSE OF YOU TOO YOUNG - JULIE FROM THE MOD SQUAD)

As we say in the aviary business, yours in guano!
Warmly,
Robin

Ms. Robin Bird
RBird Enterprises, LLC
68+1 Swallowsit Lane
Ny,Ny



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PostPosted: Thu May 01, 2008 9:12 pm Reply with quoteBack to top

fun fun.

you might want to mask the names and emails in case your lad is smart enought to search google.

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PostPosted: Thu May 01, 2008 9:14 pm Reply with quoteBack to top

Thanks - have tried to read the sticky nots and rules of engagement but a lot to absorb...thanks again...

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PostPosted: Thu May 01, 2008 9:22 pm Reply with quoteBack to top

no worries. it's a great forum with alot of helpful info.

have fun and bait safe..

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PostPosted: Thu May 01, 2008 9:30 pm Reply with quoteBack to top

One criticism that you might get is that you've given him too much information right at the start. Look at his replies. They are, so far, just copied from his standard script. All he's had to do is notice that you are interested and then he pastes in the next bit of his prepared script---two-three minutes at most, if that. Whereas you probably spent a while typing your replies.

That's okay if you want to put that level effort in at an early stage, but consider that he's probably not really taking any of those details in yet. He'll skim through them, see a generally positive response, that you're willing to help, and skip past the intricate details. At this stage, he just doesn't care. The only thing he cares about is getting your character's money.

So...

What will probably happen a little later is if you keep him on the hook long enough, he'll run out of pre-written script and he'll start to encounter all the delays that you've put in his way. THEN he'll start to write his own replies and will start to take much more notice of the content of your emails. And, more than likely, you're going to have to repeat the details from the first few emails if they are important to any story or plot you want to build up.

Again, if you want to invest that sort of effort, then go for it! But it might be worth considering (for next time) keeping your first messages fairly short and with only a few details per email. Hold back with the particulars and spoonfeed them to him over the course of the next few weeks. This stretches the bait out longer (wasting the lad's time, among other effects) and means you still have some things up your sleeve for future delays, problems, obstacles, and so on.

In short: Let him use his whole pre-written script, and once he has to write the emails himself... then the fun can begin!

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PostPosted: Thu May 01, 2008 10:00 pm Reply with quoteBack to top

Perfect victim, doing fine clapping Thumbs up , now try to make him read it all and ask some nice questions about tax laws once the money hits foreign soil. Send him a nice family picture and ask a picture of him so you can see who you are dealing with in this important business. Just a bit of chit chat, enough that he has to read it with one or two questions you need the answer from. Just repeat the question if he might forget to answer them Wink Friendly, carefully and a tad greedy, anything can be discussed and should be discussed lengthly to make sure that both parties are on the same road.
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PostPosted: Mon May 05, 2008 6:42 pm Reply with quoteBack to top

I just came to this site recently (yay me!) and I LOVE it. I started out by reading all of the letters archive. I have noticed people talking about "start out slow". However, almost ALL of Shivers first response letters start out with a lengthy reply.

So, why is it that all of the advice on the forumns say to start out with a general response?

Is it because Shiver is the man and I am a noob (which I know, I am Very Happy )?

It just seems to me that his responses seemed to work for him, and those letters are what got me hooked Twisted Evil
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PostPosted: Mon May 05, 2008 7:07 pm Reply with quoteBack to top

The letters archive show the selected successful baits. What you don't see are the (no doubt) dozens and dozens of failed starts where a lengthy reply was simply ignored. It's a very biased selection of all the types of baiting that goes on, the collection of entertaining and crowd-pleasing baits in the letters archive. Which is good for attracting new people, but the downside is that new people expect they can do that with every lad they communicate with. Truth is... you'll get more result over the long-term with a "start slow" approach, and only occasional flashes of success with the other way.

But that's just me writing words and stuff. Try it yourself! You might strike lucky and get a real entertaining lad in the first week or so... might, but it's definitely not guaranteed. More likely, if you have high expectations of a Shiver-esque bait, the first month of baiting will be very disappointing for you.

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PostPosted: Mon May 05, 2008 8:01 pm Reply with quoteBack to top

^^^ What otterfan said.

You also might try picking a lad or three and reply from 4 or 5 different characters with different approaches. from a simple "OK. Tell me more" up to the full blown novella. Most of the time, you'll get the exact same reply to each.

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PostPosted: Mon May 05, 2008 8:17 pm Reply with quoteBack to top

Well thank you, I appreciate your advice. I'm looking forward to getting started. I have an old yahoo account, but I never get any spam mail on there. Maybe I have to de-select some filters? *shrug* I'll read up on the noob forumns and see how to get started.

Thanks for the advice.
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