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Brainiac
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Sun Jan 08, 2012 5:43 am |
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^^^ to Cougar: those are really fantastic lyrics. If you don't mind I'll try
an alternate version of the "Ladland" song using those.
Crochy is right, my mix did turn out a little muffled. But I slapped it all together
in 2 days. Day 1: record guitar & bass parts, Day 2: drum parts, vox, and
mixdown. Then I sent it to C.E. later that same night.
Sometimes when I think the high end might be too bite-y and annoying to
the ears, I overcompensate and roll it off. And while trying for a super-low
demonic voice, with evil Mwahhh, ha, ha laugh, it got garbled.
So I'm fixin' it in the next few days. Thanks to everyone |
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Cougar
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Sun Jan 08, 2012 7:35 pm |
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^ Go for it. Maybe not with the demonic voice though, I kind of imagined a nursery rhyme sing-song feel for the chorus.
Seriously flattered you guys like it. Who knew Smarties could be inspirational?! |
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crotcheecher
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Sun Jan 08, 2012 10:31 pm |
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Cougar, you need to get on writing more lyrics, ASAP. And we'll be sure to have it only slightly demonic... like uh... Slayer level....
Just kidding
Big Al: Don't be shamed, talent is hard to measure across genres. And I have music that will fit your lyrics, I just can't get those three line verses to line up
Brainiac: I know the feeling about going too far when trying to correct tone, but in the opposite direction. I have tendency to feel the highs aren't enough, then getting a horrible tin-can sound on everything! |
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Phil Yerboots
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Tue Jan 10, 2012 11:28 am |
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Just heard the track. That's a serious death growl - I'd say it was bordering on the Norwegian! |
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Brainiac
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Sun Jan 15, 2012 8:01 am |
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Hi everybody. To Cougar and Phil. When I read Phil's post of his lyrics on
Dec. 22, it said "needs some serious chug". Guess I thought that's the
music style we were going with.
I ran my voice through the guitar effects processor. The one that whammies
the notes down-ward by means of a foot pedal. It sounded kinda cool at first.
That's the reason for the demonic growling voice.
Now, realizing that it's too low, muffled, and hard to understand, I re-recorded
normally. And I just sent that version to crocheecher.
Meanwhile, I'll see if I can get the new version posted up at the mediafire
file-sharing site. If anybody wants their own copy as an attachment in an
e-mail, you can PM me here and I'll give you my e-mail addy. |
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Brainiac
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Sun Jan 15, 2012 8:12 am |
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If all goes well. Here is the new version of "Ladland" with clear vox.
http://www.mediafire.com/?p705hses5kcv9us
Let me know. If the link works. Even if you like the song. Thanks. |
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Morgain Le Fay
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Sun Jan 15, 2012 1:35 pm |
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Link works. I had trouble clearly hearing the words, but then I have trouble understanding the lyrics in any song, save recordings of Christmas carols, some c&w and 1960's songs. |
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TheDane
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Sun Jan 15, 2012 1:43 pm |
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^^^ And songs abut firearms... |
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Cougar
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Sun Jan 15, 2012 3:36 pm |
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@Brainiac - had a listen. Seemed at times that the drums, guitars and vocals were fighting for dominance, which was a bit confusing for my ears. Could you bring the vocals forward a bit, to make them clearer? Maybe also need to push the drums back a bit, let vocals and guitar come through more.
Just my initial thoughts, I am not a musician! |
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Brainiac
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Mon Jan 16, 2012 2:59 am |
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^^^ Cougar, it's possible to remix any time. Thanks for listening to all.
Those lyrics of yours, I would like to try adding music, and it definitely
lends itself to a different style altogether.
This last one, I was going by the comments. Phil said he wrote lyrics for
a metal band. The word "chug" was mentioned.
The "committee" seemed to agree on a hard-rock or metal style for
"Out of Ladland". So....eh....... moving right along here. |
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crotcheecher
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Mon Jan 16, 2012 4:39 am |
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I think "chug" was referring to the guitars I quite like the way it turned out though, so no *true* complaints on my parts (I'm always nitpicky, must be SOOI's influence....yea yea I know, don't pick on the squirrel.)
I got something for Cougar's lyrics, a bit power metal/symphonic metal. I'll send you a sample in a little while.
I definitely like being able to understand the words in the current song though, and the semi-spoken vocals give it a bit of a baiter attitude, kinda how we baiters would probably talk to a scammer in person (with less expletives ) |
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Morgain Le Fay
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Mon Jan 16, 2012 10:01 pm |
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@Brainiac Thanks for the information as to why I can never understand lyrics in any song. And I thought I needed hearing aids! |
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Brainiac
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Tue Jan 17, 2012 8:51 am |
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C.E. yes I figured that "chug" meant the heavy, palm-muted style.
You're not toooo nit-picky. There will always be comments to help with
improvements to any particular song.
I have received your sample. My HP printer is now not compatible with my
Win.7 tower. So I copied down the lyrics to "Love Lies Bleeding" with paper
and a Bic pen. But, that's a good way to become more familiar with lyrics,
rather than simply hitting the "Print" button.
Gives me a good chance to look them over while painstakingly writing them
down by hand.
^^^ @Cougar. Is it okay? The chorus states that "......love lies bleeding" Yet
your title was just... "Love Lies" Was that a comment on how the lad told lies?
C.E. told me on the phone yesterday that "Love Lies Bleeding" makes a good title.
Anyway, now I'll get to work on combining all the ideas together and see what
we come up with. (And there won't be a demon vox.) |
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crotcheecher
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Tue Jan 17, 2012 9:16 am |
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Oh yes there will be. I'll attempt to do the vocals for Cougar's lyrics myself if we use my musical idea. Cougar seemed to like it. Said it had that "F You attitude" they wanted.
And just to be mean, that "chug" was referring to the guitars... in case you didn't know. I know, I know, I'm annoying. |
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Cougar
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Tue Jan 17, 2012 1:17 pm |
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Jeez, you write one little poem...
Whatever you guys want to do is fine, you're the music experts. 'Love Lies' was just the name I filed it under, if you prefer 'Love Lies Bleeding' for the title that's no problem.
Crotchy - a 'bitter, f you vibe' doesn't have to be a demon growl - ever heard a playground get nasty?
Will try and work some more on the new lyrics tonight. Technically, how short/long do they need to be to qualify as a song? |
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Badgerbait
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Tue Jan 17, 2012 7:11 pm |
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Angry/sexy feminine like Shirley Manson (Garbage) would fit the burn felt from Cougie's lyricals.
Titles don't have to fit the lyrics, Nirvana taught us that. |
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Cougar
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Tue Jan 17, 2012 7:18 pm |
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^ Aw shucks.
If you want low and gruff, I've got the initial makings of one I'm calling 'Battlezone' - will have to see how it turns out. Also working on 'It could be you' (lottery lads) and 'Lion's Den'. And I had a thought today about trying to pull one together using quotes from baiters' sig lines, which would be a nice personal touch, but no idea how that would pan out - would need some major info gathering to start. Let me get the others out the way and I'll look into it.
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...while painstakingly writing them down by hand. |
So no butt long lyrics then?
There is a well-known song which goes 'Spam Spam Spam Spam'. Change the p to a c and you're off. |
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Tue Jan 17, 2012 7:49 pm |
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Metal cover of "Cake Left Out in the Rain"?
Could be an anthem for formats gone wrong and modalities circumvented. |
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Cougar
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Tue Jan 17, 2012 8:02 pm |
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^ Get writing!
Ooohh! Just had a good title idea - 'The Lad's Lament'. |
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Brainiac
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Wed Jan 18, 2012 2:28 am |
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Cougar. Yes I'm a big Python fan. scam, scam, wonderful scam.
And you can make the lyrics as long as you want. It's my prob. that when
I bought a new Dell Inspiron tower with Windows 7 in it. I was no longer able
to use my HP photosmart 1215 printer.
The old tower had Win. XP. (if any of the techies have thoughts ???)
I google-searched but nada.
I was playing with music ideas last night for Love Lies. Think I'll start recording
here in an hour or two.
Thanks to everyone for their input. ^^Crotchy, does "chug" mean guitars or vox?
(guess I'll never live that down). |
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You are playing with my intelligence.
You are making a fool of me. I am not here for joke. ---------(FBI agent Fred Owen)
You are so stupid...are you kidding yourself or are you insane? -----(hitlad "Dirty" Sanchez) |
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Brainiac
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Wed Jan 18, 2012 9:41 am |
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Status update on "Love Lies".
Happy to report that I put down 2 guitar parts and a bass part. Talked my way
thru the lyrics. Used the built-in drum loops. So for tomorrow I'll replace the
drum machine with real drums.
So figger "Love Lies Bleeding" will be ready to send to Crotchy. He says he
will do the lyrics. I left room in the middle and at end for C.E. to solo.
Anyway, that means tomorrow my parts will be done and I will forward on
as basic tracks.
Making good progress. It was great to have lyrics and a riff or 2 for ideas.
I was going to write to C.E. but my Yahoo mail server is down. I'm getting a
404 error message. I was excited and wanted to tell him about the progress,
so...... Crotchy, if you're reading this thread..... mail tomorrow. |
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You are so stupid...are you kidding yourself or are you insane? -----(hitlad "Dirty" Sanchez) |
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crotcheecher
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Wed Jan 18, 2012 10:29 am |
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Brainy, I think "chug" meant the guitars...
Don't worry, that will get old eventually. Unless SOOI sees the thread, then he'll rip us both up for something. Crazy rat..
As for the printer, the Deskjet 990c drivers SHOULD work, but you won't have as much functionality. I hear the Photosmart 7200 drivers support the 1215, but it might not. You can try adding a custom printer as well. I'll try to walk ya through it next time we skype.
Looking forward to the progress on LLB! in the meantime, I'll have the scam, scam, scam, beans and scam. |
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Phil Yerboots
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Wed Jan 18, 2012 10:46 am |
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Chug most certainly means guitars. Its the percussive sound of metal used by everyone from Slayer to Mastadon
As in:
chug-chug
chug chuga-chug
Oh and "Screee" is the sound of solo. We need to agree on our notation!
Keep up the good work, everyone. |
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Cougar
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Wed Jan 18, 2012 12:25 pm |
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^ As opposed to 'Squee!' which is what the fangirls/boys will be doing to Crotchy and Brainiac when the albums released... |
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