Rate my bait....redux

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Posted: Sat Aug 22, 2009 11:00 pm

I love the bait, great stuff i hope to send my first bait very soon,
but google is leading to this bait by google-ing

http://www.google.nl/search?hl=nl&q=http%3A%2F%2Fsecureptv.info%2F&btnG=Zoeken&meta=

Hello I'm New here! Joined: 22 Sep 2009 Posts: 2

Very well done, me I rested awake til 4.30 a.m. only to read all your posts. I was laughing a lot. Made me feel very well . The questionary was awasome, especialy those from the police...."do you know how to made a coqtail Molotov?" or " from wich organisation and with what purpose?" " or "error due because of your IQ low lever?" After all he was not only greedy but stupid also, very stupid ! Congratulations!

Posted: Mon Sep 28, 2009 6:53 am

Hey Amark,
If you're looking for constructive criticism, I guess I can try nit-picking you a bit...

First off, I thought this was a superb straight bait. You kept him reeling by taking charge of things initially. However, you may have been able to lure him into a catastrophic trophy/safari or whatever, if you would have started with a lower payout, then worked your way up to whatever it took to get him off his ladass.
I liked the way you anticipated future events, such as using the SWIFT code to excuse the bank delays and score another form. The only thing I saw that I thought could be better was something I'm sure you caught: Since the signature and thumbprint were only required on one page, that's all he printed. You were smart to pick your battle there, but it would cause a lad more grief if he had to print off say, 19 pages and thumb/toe/nipple/phallus print and sign each of them. This was honestly the only real improvement I saw, and it didn't take anything away from the bait.
Overall you rocked this guy. If noobaiters take anything from this bait, I hope they recognize who was in charge of the transaction from square one. You rocked him Amarkisamark, and it sounds like he's not quite out of the woods yet.
Keep up the lad torment.