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IrwinFletcher
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Sat Aug 22, 2009 2:27 pm |
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Meri, your poems can be found HERE
I too received a bunch of stolen crap this morning. Poems complete with analysis that he claimed were written by children. I've slapped him silly...hopefully he'll work a bit harder now. |
_________________ -I have been beaten up suffered three broken ribs and i have been
raped by three farm workers.
-i say go and fu** ur mother asssssssssssssss or come and help ok? u think i am foooooooooooool
- let if sink into your nerves that, R3V J0HN 4BUL3 is not a cheat and God Almighty whom I serve will not let me be |
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IrwinFletcher
Master Baiter
Joined: 18 Nov 2007
Posts: 192
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Sat Aug 22, 2009 9:35 pm |
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After my slap this morning, the Reverend made another attempt. These, I am sure he wrote himself, but I don't see how they qualify as poetry. It is very sad that the closest thing to poetry I've received so far talks about slaughtering a hen.
Anyway here are his attempts today for your enjoyment.
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Once I know a drunker who knows how to make money, he has the influence of doing well. But his friends are bad kind of people that made him do things not his will. It came to a hat he saw a ghost who made him to be afraid. Later in his life, he became a mad man all his friends left him at that time of problem. The God sent his servant that made him well.
After all this, he turns away from his sin and accept God as his creator. |
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Once I know a girl who school in Abuja Nigeria, always going evil and does not like good things.
One day, she met a man who thought her how to make good leaving; after all, she became rich but does not want to stop her evil.
Then she met a pastor who thought her the word of God for forgiveness and she turned away from her evil ways and accepted Christ. |
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Once I know a sinner who loves earthly things. he makes fortune and works from place to place and spends on girls every day by going to party drinking from one place to another buying all kinds of thing because he has the money. But one day, his business fall and he was not working again to places, he only sit down all and all his girls friends ran away from him because he was no more rich how he was before. The first day he went to church, he begged to forgive all his sins and give another job. So God did as he requested and the man gave his life to Christ and stopped doing bad things. |
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_________________ -I have been beaten up suffered three broken ribs and i have been
raped by three farm workers.
-i say go and fu** ur mother asssssssssssssss or come and help ok? u think i am foooooooooooool
- let if sink into your nerves that, R3V J0HN 4BUL3 is not a cheat and God Almighty whom I serve will not let me be |
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IrwinFletcher
Master Baiter
Joined: 18 Nov 2007
Posts: 192
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Sat Aug 22, 2009 9:41 pm |
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And now an attempt from S1ster R0se B3n. I enjoyed this one.
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THE SUN IS DOWN,
THE SON IS CROWN,
WITH A GUN FOR FUN,
HIS BROTHER HAS GONE FOR HIS TURN.
A WINE WAS ORDERED,
THEY DINE AND OFFERED,
AND PRESENTS A GOLD,
TO THEIR PARENTS AND THEIR FOLD.
THE SCENE WAS FILLED,
ALSO SEEN AT THE FIELD,
WAS BEN AND PAUL,
WITH KEN AND SAUL,
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This one came with rhyming words highlighted for me. It may not seem like much, but I'm very proud of the good "sister". |
_________________ -I have been beaten up suffered three broken ribs and i have been
raped by three farm workers.
-i say go and fu** ur mother asssssssssssssss or come and help ok? u think i am foooooooooooool
- let if sink into your nerves that, R3V J0HN 4BUL3 is not a cheat and God Almighty whom I serve will not let me be |
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blacksheep
Master Baiter
Joined: 02 Aug 2009
Posts: 144
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Sat Aug 22, 2009 11:40 pm |
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IrwinFletcher, those are great! I loved the one about the guy whose girlfriends ran away when he went broke! |
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IrwinFletcher
Master Baiter
Joined: 18 Nov 2007
Posts: 192
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Sun Aug 23, 2009 12:59 am |
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Hey thanks for reading it blacksheep. I honestly barely made it through the first one. I never read what he writes if it's too long. I skim it, but doing more than that might cause brain damage, so be careful. |
_________________ -I have been beaten up suffered three broken ribs and i have been
raped by three farm workers.
-i say go and fu** ur mother asssssssssssssss or come and help ok? u think i am foooooooooooool
- let if sink into your nerves that, R3V J0HN 4BUL3 is not a cheat and God Almighty whom I serve will not let me be |
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Merry Widow
Master of Master Baiters
Joined: 05 Mar 2009
Posts: 582
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Sun Aug 23, 2009 1:09 am |
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@ IrwinFletcher, thanks for finding them. I googled them and didn't find anything.
His first peom was stolen, why wouldn't the other 2? He does write quite well for a lad. Now I have to decide just how to slap him. |
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IrwinFletcher
Master Baiter
Joined: 18 Nov 2007
Posts: 192
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Sun Aug 23, 2009 2:18 pm |
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Meri, I just took a short phrase from the poem "sw33t surrender soft g3ntle kiss" put it in quotes and plugged it into google. Poppep right up. I've had lots of stolen poems come from that site. The lads seem to frequent it.
I had to be very specific about what I wanted for my poem in order to get anything from them. (and even then they get it wrong) Try insisting that the poem have your name in it, with at least five words that rhyme with your name. OK, so maybe not exactly like that, but make it so it's impossible for them to steal it from somewhere else. That's the lesson I've learned so far trying to get these damn poems written. You have to guide these morons step by step. If I had learned it sooner, I might have had something better to submit. |
_________________ -I have been beaten up suffered three broken ribs and i have been
raped by three farm workers.
-i say go and fu** ur mother asssssssssssssss or come and help ok? u think i am foooooooooooool
- let if sink into your nerves that, R3V J0HN 4BUL3 is not a cheat and God Almighty whom I serve will not let me be |
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IrwinFletcher
Master Baiter
Joined: 18 Nov 2007
Posts: 192
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Mon Aug 24, 2009 9:43 pm |
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As a last minute attempt to get something, I responded to emails with a copy and paste message to many many lads. I instructed them to complete a quick psychological test which I would analyze to see if they are intelligent and honest enough to do business with. They were given a list of ten words, told to rhyme all ten and form a poem.
Here is one I received today
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Shiver.... teacher
risk...... sick
money......honey
fake.....take
true......through
Box........Bus
Gold....... Hold
God........Got
Cancer....... dancer
goat........boat
Did the teacher shiver when it was rainy?
I didnt risk it because i was sick.
The Boy said he loved me than Honey.
I didn't take the Money because it was a fake one.
I said i will be through soon with the true fact of the whole matter.
I put the Gaot in the Boat.
The Cancer patient was a Dancer.
I got God in my life now so i fear no evil anymore.
I hold the Gold firmly so it won't fall.
When i was travelling, i put my Box in the Bus.
So I will be waiting to hear from you quickly |
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_________________ -I have been beaten up suffered three broken ribs and i have been
raped by three farm workers.
-i say go and fu** ur mother asssssssssssssss or come and help ok? u think i am foooooooooooool
- let if sink into your nerves that, R3V J0HN 4BUL3 is not a cheat and God Almighty whom I serve will not let me be |
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IrwinFletcher
Master Baiter
Joined: 18 Nov 2007
Posts: 192
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Tue Aug 25, 2009 1:59 pm |
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A poem received today from S1ster R0se B3n again.
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THE PRESS CONFIRMED THE DATE,
HIS DRESS WAS LEFT FOR FAITH,
HE CLAIMED THE MURDER,
AND BLAMED THE MOTHER,
THE PLACE WAS TIGHT,
THEY TRACE THE FIGHT,
THE BOY WAS THE CAUSE,
BECAUSE HIS TOY WAS A CURSE,
HE WAS JAILED FOR THE CASE,
AND WAS BAILED AT THE BASE,
HE MET HIS FRIEND INCHARGED,
HIS MATE DISCHARGED,
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_________________ -I have been beaten up suffered three broken ribs and i have been
raped by three farm workers.
-i say go and fu** ur mother asssssssssssssss or come and help ok? u think i am foooooooooooool
- let if sink into your nerves that, R3V J0HN 4BUL3 is not a cheat and God Almighty whom I serve will not let me be |
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N.O.R.A
Baiting Guru
Joined: 17 Feb 2008
Posts: 2358
Location: Enjoying all the love from Africa.
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Tue Aug 25, 2009 9:07 pm |
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My reverend father lad who offered me big monies happened to fall in love with me so he left his church to share his life with me. He now lives like a true poet, homeless and hungry. Luckily, he is still able to call me several times a day. When he doesn't ask me to go to WU and send him money for food and housing, he writes me poems. Enjoy.
WARNING: You may find the second one NSFW.
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I love you like a school boy love his pen
like god love the church and die for them i will die for you my love
please dont hurt me please
you are my life my world my wife my hope and queen. |
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BABE BROWSING ON WEB SITES CAN BE EXCITING
BUT IT IS EVEN MORE EXCITING ON THE WEB SITE BETWEEN YOUR THIGHS.
FOOD IS SWEET,BV D ONE B/W UR LEGS IS SWEETER.
I JUST CAN,T STOPLONGING 4 IT.
BABE I LUV U? |
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May ur bed be as soft d clouds,
ur pillow as tender as a child
as u sleep 2nite.
Sweet dream,luv u? |
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Luv speaks 4rm d hat,
it needs nt 2 explain bt rada it speaks 4 itsself.
do u kno dat ur voice makes meanin 2me?
lets pray & c wat wil hapen nxt.
i truly luv. |
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YOU ARE MY HOPE
MY WORLD
MY LIFE
MY GOLD
THE MOTHER OF MY UNBORN CHILDREN
I LOVE YOU LIKE NEVER BEFOR MY LOVE. |
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_________________ "I JUST WANT TO HEAR YOUR VOICE,IT WILL DO A LOT OF WONDERS TO MY BODY" [Lad being baited since May 2009]
"Yes,Miss N0ra is a prostitute,a slut and a professional harlot." [Another Lad, being baited since May 2009, to one of my characters]
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"set him straight first on the pimple soaps and cleansers,then suggest the other..
we don't want a pimpley,less wrinkly botoxed man running loose" [SlapHappy]
My Mentor is a young, hot, sexy man or woman.
"I'm a girl." [Slightlyoutofit] |
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IrwinFletcher
Master Baiter
Joined: 18 Nov 2007
Posts: 192
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Tue Aug 25, 2009 9:25 pm |
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BUT IT IS EVEN MORE EXCITING ON THE WEB SITE BETWEEN YOUR THIGHS. |
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_________________ -I have been beaten up suffered three broken ribs and i have been
raped by three farm workers.
-i say go and fu** ur mother asssssssssssssss or come and help ok? u think i am foooooooooooool
- let if sink into your nerves that, R3V J0HN 4BUL3 is not a cheat and God Almighty whom I serve will not let me be |
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VForVendetta1605
Master Baiter
Joined: 14 Aug 2009
Posts: 150
Location: In the not too distant future
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Tue Aug 25, 2009 9:26 pm |
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what does NSFW stand for? Non Sensical Fuckedup Work?
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_________________ ...A building is a symbol, as is the act of destroying it. Symbols are given power by people. A symbol, in and of itself is powerless, but with enough people behind it, blowing up a building can change the world.
we do not condune such act, so you have to act like a mature man because you are dealing with a company. Mr Fr3derick W. Sm1th the FEDEX company
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Merry Widow
Master of Master Baiters
Joined: 05 Mar 2009
Posts: 582
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Wed Aug 26, 2009 4:11 am |
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NSFW = Not Safe for Work |
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blacksheep
Master Baiter
Joined: 02 Aug 2009
Posts: 144
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Wed Aug 26, 2009 6:41 pm |
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IrwinFletcher, The psychological test you sent out was a great idea. Good work!
Niagara, the second one was my favorite. Great job. |
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this offer kindly let me know or you fuck out off my mail."-Vivian Catim |
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IrwinFletcher
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Joined: 18 Nov 2007
Posts: 192
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Sun Aug 30, 2009 2:22 pm |
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I am currently torturing this lad with S3curity Shi3ld, and even then he comes back with another "poem" for me. What a hard worker.
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DEAR REV J1M,
THANKS FOR YOUR MAIL.
HERE IS THE LIST OF ANOTHER POEM.
WAS TRAIN TO BE IN SHAPE,
THE TRANE WAS FULL OF APE,
HE PERFORMED THE TASK,
AND INFORMED THEM FAST.
WAS PROMOTTED FOR THIS FACT,
AND DEMOTTED FOR BEING FAT,
HE CRIED FOR BEING FOOLISH,
TRIED TO STOP THE RUBISH. |
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_________________ -I have been beaten up suffered three broken ribs and i have been
raped by three farm workers.
-i say go and fu** ur mother asssssssssssssss or come and help ok? u think i am foooooooooooool
- let if sink into your nerves that, R3V J0HN 4BUL3 is not a cheat and God Almighty whom I serve will not let me be |
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667jjk
Master Baiter
Joined: 30 May 2009
Posts: 224
Location: On one side of the circle
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Sun Aug 30, 2009 4:49 pm |
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Finally, I have one. It's a bit short, I know, but surely that means its lad-written?
Its from a 'deaf' love scammer (see:http://forum.419eater.com/forum/viewtopic.php?t=170435).
I wrote a short poem, then told the lad to write one which featured the words 'duck', 'buck' and 'chuck'.
I got this:
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I HAVE A GOLDEN DUCK
SHINES LIKE A GOLDEN STAR AT NOON .
IT KEEP CHOKING ON A BUCK AND CHUCK
I LOVE THE DUCK ALOT AND CANNOT AFFORD TO LOOSE IT ... |
Sorry: it doesn't rhyme. Not all poems do . |
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667jjk
Master Baiter
Joined: 30 May 2009
Posts: 224
Location: On one side of the circle
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Fri Sep 04, 2009 5:31 pm |
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Update: I just received another from the same lad.
I said to him/('her'):
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Dear kar3n,
It has occurred to me that you could write a poem for me to get well.
Your poems cheer me up greatly, so can you write one with 4 verses about a fox and a banana? Perhaps the fox could play with it.
And can the last verse wish me good health?
Oh thankyou dear, I knew I could count on you.
Love,
D1ll. |
Eventually, I got what follows:
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hello my love i hope you get well soon .
i know a fox thats fell form a pit.
the pit is so dip that the fox cant get out of it .
somebody help !
the fox is dieing .
nobody to comeby to help the fox .
i love to see the fox come out.
what could i have done.
i bought a banana and show the fox
the fox jumped out
when he see the banana
and he was so happy
i was also happy to help the fox.
my love i hope you get well soon
i am sending lots of love to you
over there.
for you to get well,better and happy. |
I have to admit, I'm beginning to like this ! |
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OliverCat
Hello I'm New here!
Joined: 18 Sep 2009
Posts: 6
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Mon Sep 28, 2009 7:01 pm |
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IrwinFletcher wrote: |
Inspired by G0mer and his B0yz site, I created my own little site for my church's poetry contest. I have one reverend interested in entering and I'm hoping for a submission soon.
I'm not technically inclined at all, and it's my first site, but here it is(under construction).
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Hello mate, great idea with the site by the way. Just thought I'd give you a wee tip:
Remove the active links from those images as, well we know most of these lads are not too bright and you don't want to encourage even the slightest confusion as they might have when they click and are no longer on the main page..!
If you need some help with the basics then you can give me a shout..
Basically the parts to remove would be:
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The parts BEFORE the images is like
<a href="http://sites.google.com/site/rhymingforjesus/home/money.jpg?attredirects=0" imageanchor="1">
(Delete all of that)
The part after each image is just
</a>
Delte that too but only the one that follows after the image.
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You probably knew all that and chose to have those images clickable but I just thought sending them off the main page may be too much for them!
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iamlovinit05
Hello I'm New here!
Joined: 02 Sep 2009
Posts: 13
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Thu Oct 15, 2009 3:20 am |
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Is this competition over? So who is the winner? |
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Hawkeyewon
419Eater is my life
Joined: 09 Nov 2005
Posts: 347
Location: between Rocky and Bullwinkle, but closer to Bob Clampett! ;^)
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Sun Dec 27, 2009 11:06 am |
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<---- Not my pet, but if anyone wants to use this original picture, you have my express permission. Contributions welcome |
_________________ "I want to assure you that you will not be paying ant money in this."
"I don't have transportation, I only have a car
I will be able to manage a truck if I have one."
"know it's me that's on my knees swallowing"
www.scammers-exposed.com
www.romancescam.com |
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Billy Milligan
Wannabe Baiter
Joined: 26 Nov 2009
Posts: 99
Location: In the sewer of the internet, fishing for turds.
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Thu Jan 21, 2010 6:16 pm |
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iamlovinit05 wrote: |
Is this competition over? So who is the winner? |
Yeah c'mon or were they all so dire that all runners came joint last?
Btw sorry to necro, but I gotta say a new rap star who's career I will be "developing" has created something which IS all his own work. I think it's worthy of a belated honourable mention. Especially after only 3 mails.
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See the w@y the g1rls dem dey pvmp Henne5y.........
l@dies are u feel1ng dizzy
i got more Henne5sy to make you cr@zy
come to my j@cuzzy, let me get you b1zzy
you can put my d1ck right in your pu55y
on the internet the wh1te men call me l1zzy
cos dey kn0w i love Ef1zzy
m@sturbat1ng them, making dem g0ing crazy
Now i got my m0ney, but you kn0w is not e@sy..... |
Leeted to hell, cos I got it fresh like a steaming pile of dung just this morning. |
_________________ "piss off you thief. we will confiscate your fund tomorrow Take Note !!!" - West3rn Onion
"Now I know that you are a psycho. Never you contact Me if you know that You are that unserious person fool!" - P Morg@n
"Stop writting to me again because if you try to send an more mail to my mail box i will inform the police about you and they will get you arristed fool like you." - Barr P Jame5
"GO F**K WITH YOUR MOTHER A**HOLE.......... "- K@zim- m@[email protected] <-100% risky free phones
"yES WE HAVE THE DERREN BROWN AVAILABLE IN STOCK" 5teffan Mue1ler - <[email protected]
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linkster2o
Master Baiter
Joined: 07 Mar 2010
Posts: 193
Location: Buried under Books
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Sun Mar 14, 2010 9:55 pm |
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Shall I compare thee to a summer's day?
Thou art more lovely and more temperate.
Rough winds do shake the darling buds of May,
And summer's lease hath all too short a date.
Sometime too hot the eye of heaven shines,
And often is his gold complexion dimmed;
And every fair from fair sometime declines,
By chance, or nature's changing course untrimmed.
But thy eternal summer shall not fade
Nor lose possession of that fair thou ow'st;
Nor shall death brag thou wand'rest in his shade,
When in eternal lines to time thou grow'st,
So long as men can breathe or eyes can see,
So long lives this, and this gives life to thee.
Received this from a love lad after I requested poetry....
I didn't know I was baiting the bard himself! |
_________________ "I was a real prick"
Franklin
Franklin, Accra Ghana-Kpalime Togo
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Haud Misericordia |
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Cold Justice
Master Baiter
Joined: 18 Jun 2010
Posts: 129
Location: Inside the Neverwhere of my mind.
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Fri Jun 18, 2010 8:38 am |
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I just joined today, or I would have had some good ones for you. I didn't even have to solicit them, the jerk introduced himself with them. Found me "passionate and interesting" although he had only read my bio...which was anything but passionate. After 3 long days of posting almost steadily, I had to block him.
You all are great! My six graders wrote better poetry and weren't nearly as dense as these guys, whew!
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